Offer Revision Request Letter

Dear [Name],

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to discuss some concerns regarding the offer I received from [Company Name] dated [Date] for the position of [Job Title]. While I am enthusiastic about joining the company, I would like to request a revision to certain aspects of the offer to better align with my expectations and qualifications.

Firstly, I would like to address the proposed date of joining. Due to some personal commitments and the need to wrap up my current responsibilities, I kindly request that my joining date be extended to [New Joining Date]. This will allow me sufficient time to conclude my outstanding projects and ensure a smooth transition into my new role at [Company Name].

Secondly, I would like to discuss the details of the offer itself. While the initial offer is appreciated, I was hoping for a slight adjustment in some areas to reflect my experience and the value I can bring to the company. I kindly request that the following aspects be considered:

• Salary: After careful consideration and market research, I believe an adjustment to the salary package would be reasonable. I propose a salary of [Proposed Salary] per annum, which I believe better reflects my qualifications and industry standards.
• Benefits: I noticed that the offer does not include [Specific Benefit]. Given the importance of [Specific Benefit] for my personal circumstances, I kindly request that it be included in the revised offer.
• Additional Perks: Considering my experience and skills, I believe there is room for negotiation regarding additional perks such as [Perk 1], [Perk 2], and [Perk 3]. I am open to discussing these further and finding a mutually beneficial arrangement.

I am confident that these revisions will enable me to fully commit to the role and contribute effectively to the success of [Company Name]. I want to emphasize my passion for this opportunity and my eagerness to become a valued member of your team.

Attached to this letter, you will find a revised offer request document in DOCX format. It contains the details of my requested revisions for your review and consideration. I kindly ask that you take the time to go through it and discuss the possibility of implementing these changes with the relevant team members.

I am available for further discussion or clarification if needed. I appreciate your understanding and consideration of my requested revisions. I am excited about the potential of joining [Company Name] and look forward to hearing from you with the revised offer.

Thank you for your time and attention to this matter.

Sincerely,

[Your Name]